Translation talk:Mishnah/Seder Zeraim/Tractate Berakhot/Chapter 1/1

Changes to the translation
I feel that this better reflects the Hebrew version of the text. Moreover, I think it's easier to read, even in the English now. In the case of the first section, for example, we already know that we're talking about when to recite the Shema, so that fact doesn't need to be repeated every sentence. Karimarie 22:42, 26 September 2006 (UTC)