Talk:Derelict (Allison)

Tweaks to Text
I don't know if there's a definitive edition from which this text came, but some of the lines were nonsensical and called out for correction. I've used as my "text" this recording which is only as authoritative as any other I've come across and no more. I don't love it in all regards -- I rejected its use of "sties" where this article had "skies", for example -- but it seems worthy of being a source.Czrisher (talk) 17:47, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * That YouTube link is no longer functional, so this text is unsourced again. I just added a scan-backed copy of the text which is essentially identical, so I have replaced this edition with the new one and redirected this page to the versions page for this work. —Beleg Tâl (talk) 17:24, 25 October 2019 (UTC)