Talk:A Boy's Will/A Dream Pang

Original text in 1913 failed to close the quote at the end of the first stanza. Text shown here incorporates the closing quotation marks appearing in later collections. Labombarde (talk) 00:07, 2 December 2009 (UTC)

Published copy of 1913 edition did not include a comma at the close of line 1 of stanza 2. Although the version appearing in later collections had a comma there, I have erased it here, since this version (reflecting copyright considerations) is intended to reflect the original 1913 version. Labombarde (talk) 00:10, 2 December 2009 (UTC)