Page talk:Thomas De Quincey The Defier of Ghosts Manuscript.pdf/1

-- Yodin T 21:45, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Line 2: unclear if "a great man" is crossed out
 * Line 2: The Works of Thomas De Quincey volume 3, p.405 has "or" instead of "Or"
 * Line 3: Is there a ‘ or “ before the deleted "If"?
 * Line 4: unclear if "poor" is crossed out
 * Line 5: the deleted "a" after Klatschausen could be a colon
 * Line 8: the deleted "on" is unclear
 * Line 10: "Almanack" could be "Almanach"
 * Line 11: the deleted "a breath" is unclear
 * Line 12: "Office" could be "Officer"
 * Line 13: inserted "The next" is unclear: it looks like it might start with a capital I, like the deleted "In" before it
 * Line 15: comma is unclear between "steps" and "and"
 * Line 15: "Every" is unclear
 * Line 16: deleted "d" is unclear
 * Line 21: is there some punctuation between "house" and "Mr."?
 * Line 23: deleted "as" is unclear
 * Line 24: "fear" is unclear
 * Line 25: "know" is unclear