Page talk:Aleksander Głowacki - O odkryciach i wynalazkach.djvu/8

Ping User:Nihil novi: I have made some minor revisions here. Can you review? If we agree that this is fine, than I will tick this page as validated. --Piotrus (talk) 09:48, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you!
 * I think that, for consistency, "|Invention" should be corrected to "Invention".
 * I would keep the "a" in "a steel". The author means "a kind of steel", which does require the article adjective, "a".
 * In the passage about gunpowder, I notice that I added the word "three": "these three materials". Prus does not say "three", but I think the presence of that adjective does add clarity by emphasizing that the three substances must all be present to produce gunpowder. So I would keep "three", though it does not, strictly, appear in Prus' original text.
 * With those caveats, the page looks good. Thank you! Please let me know, if you have any questions.
 * Nihil novi (talk) 10:41, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Ping User:Piotrus: I have gone ahead and made the corrections that I mentioned above.
 * I appreciate your change of "mass" to "substance", and the commas. (Nota bene, an introductory adverbial phrase at the start of a sentence, if the phrase is brief, does not always require a comma.)
 * Thank you.
 * Nihil novi (talk) 11:58, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Ping User:Piotrus: I suggest not marking any page of the translation as "validated" until the whole translation has been reviewed. In my experience, questions often arise at various stages of the translation process.
 * However, in the course of reviewing the translation, please feel free to make changes directly in the yellow-tagged text. If I am aware that a page has been reviewed, I can examine the changes in the page's editing log.
 * Changes that you have recommended so far have improved the translation. It is helpful to have a second pair of eyes review a text.
 * Thanks.
 * Nihil novi (talk) 07:40, 13 July 2020 (UTC)